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PostSubject: [KonahaANBU] Paradox (25/7/2017) (Indigo Team IC 2)   Wed Jul 26, 2017 1:46 pm

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Production: ( i dont understand this)

Editor/s :
me /myself

Anime Used:
Erased, Steins Gate, Rezero, Rewrite, Evangelion 1.11, Psycho pass,  Fate/Zero, Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood, Tokyo Ghoul, The girl who leapt through time, Grisaia no Meikyuu: Caprice no Mayu 0, Terror in Resonance

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Octane/Nick Road

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(Indigo Team IC 2)

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plz provide some feedback for better implementation next time

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special thanks to KazeShin and DrunkenPony

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PostSubject: Re: [KonahaANBU] Paradox (25/7/2017) (Indigo Team IC 2)   Wed Jul 26, 2017 3:24 pm

Hello Anbu! Thanks for sharing your video here!

First of all i see improvement from your previous videos, your compositions look more polished than before.
The video wasnt bad, i liked the concept and how you conveyed it throughout the video.
There were some things that bothered me though and i would like to point them out.
0:35 i didnt really like the duplicate scene in reverse, i dont think it was really useful in any way in your clip (i would say you put it cause you didnt have time or run out of scenes :P)
0:38 i would have liked a transition there, one scene is a bit white and blue and the other is green and red, the cut doesnt work that well when the colors are too different.
0:43 when the guy starts running really fast i dont like his motion, its not natural enough for me, if you had that scene sped up i would have liked it to be a bit slower.
0:47 same problem as the one above
0:55 & 1:03 i dont like the use of the mask transitions here, when you use those, make sure the colors of the scene are similar to them or color correct the masks themselves. Also you should try to use those when there is a point of origins, for the fire for example, in your video the fire came out of thin air, it would be best used in scenes which have fire already or explosions, smoke etc.
1:06 a flash transition would work pretty well there imo.
That's it i guess.

Finally my favorite sequence was the one at 1:00, i liked what you did there!
That's all for my feedback, good luck with future projects and i hope you will be given a placement that will satisfy you in the IC

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PostSubject: Re: [KonahaANBU] Paradox (25/7/2017) (Indigo Team IC 2)   Thu Jul 27, 2017 8:23 pm

thanks for feedback and quick response Andrew. 0:35 there the scene was meant to be repeated but the first run was to be different with some scanning FX but no time left to do it. i should have replaced it ultimately. 0:43 and 47 that was intentionally but seeing many ppl pointing it out , it was a bad decision on my end. 0:55 and 1:03 my beta-testers pointed it out too but i had no scene to replace it with no time. i wish i could have done something better there. 0:38 ik i need to work on grading and coherency and i will try my best on next one. 1:06 flash damn that must have been a better decision than a motion hard cut. Thanks. for placement out of 81 idk but ik one thing imo MDL weighs in technical work ,coherency and consistency more than concept . He usually prefers better executed video so whatever i will get i will be satisfied. what points i will get from Nico and kazu, i have no idea.
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