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PostSubject: [xAkinaNozomi] Nightmare (01/01/2016)   Fri Jan 01, 2016 8:49 pm



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Anime Used: Kyoukai no Kanata: I'll be here - Mirai - hen (Movie)
Song/Artist: NateWantsToBattle - Nightmare
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Description: This video was a hard challenge, because it was actually the first time of me edting an Action AMV @.@. I edited some MEP Parts with action before, but editing a full video was a lot harder.
I think in the knowledge of that I never edited a full of this style, it turned out pretty well xD^^. Anyway, I hope you enjoy! ^^

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PostSubject: Re: [xAkinaNozomi] Nightmare (01/01/2016)   Sat Jan 02, 2016 3:22 am

heyy not bad i really liked it :3. Good job

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PostSubject: Re: [xAkinaNozomi] Nightmare (01/01/2016)   Sat Jan 02, 2016 11:55 am

Hello!

Neat amv,i don't usually watch KnK videos cause i'm mean like that but regardless i did watch your video this morning,i don't know why but i don't particularly regret it.

The only things that i didn't like in your amv were some transition sequences being both offsync and with scenes that didn't fit the transition that well,or more like they werent handled to fit the transition that well,also most scenes in those transitions were only a few frames long taking away from the flow of your amv.If you didn't understand of what part im talking about,don't worry,i wouldn't either so here's a timestamp for example 0:48-0:49.5

I don't know if it's because i'm sick atm or not but at some points throughout the video the combination of blur and some kind of glow/brightness fx were too much for my eyes.

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PostSubject: Re: [xAkinaNozomi] Nightmare (01/01/2016)   Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:06 pm

@iKuro: Thank you :)!

@Pieetrr: Thank you very much for the criticism, I know that I still have a lot to learn, so I'm thankful for every critic :)! I didn't realize these things and I hope I can make it better next time.
Ooh, you're sick? :/ Get well soon!
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PostSubject: Re: [xAkinaNozomi] Nightmare (01/01/2016)   Tue Jan 05, 2016 12:43 pm

I liked it and i agree with what Pieetrr said
Good luck with your next project ;)

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PostSubject: Re: [xAkinaNozomi] Nightmare (01/01/2016)   Wed Jan 06, 2016 4:51 pm

O today is forum day for me. Okay!
As I believe I've commented before, this is nice. And I understand how frustrating action editing can be for drama and sentimental editors
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What I find to be missing in this video is flow. Or at least I find it to be missing in the 1st half. The scene selection and arrangement in the slow intro section might have had a meaning, but it didn't flow well, and unless somebody concentrates, the scenes would come of as random.
With the action part you did really good with getting the cuts right. The pace was indeed suitable for action, but flow was still an issue here since the scenes did not all compliment each other, and made some of the switches between clips come of as rough.
the 2nd half of the video went much better, I think you might have gotten the hang of how to do things while you were still working, which is cool indeed. But I did wish if you had focused more on the sync with the vocal sounds when they became too great like at 1:07 with "awaaaay" or 1:22 with "forced to hiiide". Moments like these make a lot of difference when you try to match them, and one can never say no to good sync.

In general nice transitions and progression with your editing. Keep going yo!

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PostSubject: Re: [xAkinaNozomi] Nightmare (01/01/2016)   Sat Jan 09, 2016 3:50 pm

@ZoroIttoryu: Thanks :)

@Changelling: Thank you very much! I'm going to try my best to improve these things you said!^^
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