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PostSubject: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Sun Oct 18, 2015 1:53 am

Hey, I have finally done my first Tokyo Ghoul amv. It literally took me my full free week for that. The lag and the freeze kill me ! Every 3 minutes, the screen freeze and I can't click on anything, I can't close it. I feel a lot of pain and struggle. I also do a loooot of mask as you can see... or not, but it was soooooo long and I hope that my hard work on this you guys will see because I'm gonna cry :'( When I was finished, I have the same reaction than when we win 1 million dollars for real...

Creator: Allegory Stark AMV
Anime: Tokyo Ghoul
Song: If I Died Young (Nightcore)

My Life For One Week: Editing > Eat > LoL > Editing > Eat > Sleep > Editing > Eat > Lol > Editing > Eat > Sleep.......


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PostSubject: Re: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Sun Oct 18, 2015 5:32 am

I really liked this bro good job :)

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PostSubject: Re: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Sun Oct 18, 2015 6:08 am

Void AMV wrote:
I really liked this bro good job :)
Thanks ! I really like your profile pic, me next to you, I look like an amateur :3
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PostSubject: Re: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Sun Oct 18, 2015 6:23 am

Thanks man it was made today also you're a better editor then me ahahah im still learning and mostly edit raw :)

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PostSubject: Re: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Sun Oct 18, 2015 2:42 pm

Allegory Stark wrote:

My Life For One Week: Editing > Eat > LoL > Editing > Eat > Sleep > Editing > Eat > Lol > Editing > Eat > Sleep.....
You'll find millions with a similar style Lol, me included. Until I start university in a few months.

Now as usual. The amount of effort that you put, and the work that you do in your videos in admirable. I see that your long masks have improved a bit, (but they're still kind of rough), and you're doing even more new techniques. But there is 1 main problem here in my book, and its that the video is not "clean", and this is due to the fact that your techniques are unrefined. It is mostly the severely overpowered camera that creates this. There is just too much motion going on in 1 image, and that isn't good.
You see the way of good FX is not how many of them you do, but how effective they are, and having them so strong in my face kinda renders them ineffective.
Also a problem that I had with this video is that You put some of the very intense Tokyo Ghoul clips with a song that doesn't work with anything this intense. For example 0:22 - 0:28 and 0:34 - 0:40, this is a big mood and lyric sync problem. So try to have the best clips for each song segment.

Damn tho dude, I really admire how much work you put in your videos, and how many videos you do. That's passion alright! Keep going!

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PostSubject: Re: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Sun Oct 18, 2015 5:51 pm

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Now as usual. The amount of effort that you put, and the work that you do in your videos in admirable. I see that your long masks have improved a bit, (but they're still kind of rough), and you're doing even more new techniques. But there is 1 main problem here in my book, and its that the video is not "clean", and this is due to the fact that your techniques are unrefined. It is mostly the severely overpowered camera that creates this. There is just too much motion going on in 1 image, and that isn't good.
You see the way of good FX is not how many of them you do, but how effective they are, and having them so strong in my face kinda renders them ineffective.
Also a problem that I had with this video is that You put some of the very intense Tokyo Ghoul clips with a song that doesn't work with anything this intense. For example 0:22 - 0:28 and 0:34 - 0:40, this is a big mood and lyric sync problem. So try to have the best clips for each song segment.

Damn tho dude, I really admire how much work you put in your videos, and how many videos you do. That's passion alright! Keep going!

Yeah, I know that their have a lot of fx, but this time I just want to do what I feel like to do and not having an restriction. Also, this part 0:53 forced me to make it more darker because we going to see my imperfection into masking :( I was sad, cause it took me like 6 hours... I will stop doing amv for awhile cause this one kill me. I will make something more watchable for your guys next time ahah "sarcasm". But thank you !! And when you comment on my other AMV, I was begin to kill my pc, whiteout you, I would not have finished yet ahah. Why I still finish when my pc freeze continually, is because for a week I see a lot of new editor nakama who follow my channel and I didn't upload amv for 3 weeks so I was scare they unfollow, but I really do it for them too.
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PostSubject: Re: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Sun Oct 18, 2015 5:56 pm

Yea the most important thing is to do what you want to do :) The things you hear would just be suggestions.

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PostSubject: Re: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Mon Oct 19, 2015 3:52 pm

Im gonna have to agree with Changelling on this one
Keep it up!

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PostSubject: Re: [Allegory Stark AMV] If I died young   Wed Oct 21, 2015 4:44 am

ZoroIttoryu wrote:
Im gonna have to agree with Changelling on this one
Keep it up!

Thank you :)
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