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PostSubject: [Koinu] Shattered (24/04/2015)   Wed Apr 29, 2015 12:00 pm

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Download link: sendspace.com wkdcra
Editor/s : Koinu
Anime Used: Byousoku 5 Centimeter
Song/Artist: Shattered - Trading Yesterday
Description: Hiyo's! Thought I might share my recent AMV.
Positive criticism is always appreciated. xD

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PostSubject: Re: [Koinu] Shattered (24/04/2015)   Thu Apr 30, 2015 11:27 am

A lot of transitions (crossfades mostly) are hard on the eye and the blur does not help,more like it adds oil to the fire at some parts.My advice to begin with is to use smaller amounts of blur-it still will get the job done,and crossfade between frames with similar lighting/colouring.Some zooms are not correct and throw off the viewer(examples 0:59,1:05).Not correct in the way that where you zoom it was already well detailed in the previous scene and the change in angle and prospective does not make it a decent transition and takes away from the amv.

A lot of flashes felt like too short and overpowering.In 1:25 looks like you used the same scene as in 1:42,even if its not the same it looks identical and most people will get turned off by noticing this.I don't know if it's just me but in youtube the amv is in not good quality with some light pixelation even in places.When you post here its better to post a download link rather a YT stream but i get the idea that this isnt 100% youtube and its at least one of: your render settings are found wanting,your converter is not a good one and/resulting-in/or your footage is bad quality.Better check on that.

Your coloring is mostly on the good side but the lack of A grade quality footage drags it down a bit.

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PostSubject: Re: [Koinu] Shattered (24/04/2015)   Thu Apr 30, 2015 11:43 am

Pieetrr wrote:
I don't know if it's just me but in youtube the amv is in not good quality with some light pixelation even in places.

Thanks for the advice, tho are you sure you watched it in 720p+? The quality seemed fine for me O_o
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PostSubject: Re: [Koinu] Shattered (24/04/2015)   Thu Apr 30, 2015 2:27 pm

I might be wrong,if you post a download link we'll know.

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PostSubject: Re: [Koinu] Shattered (24/04/2015)   Thu Apr 30, 2015 4:50 pm

Pieetrr wrote:
I might be wrong,if you post a download link we'll know.

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PostSubject: Re: [Koinu] Shattered (24/04/2015)   Thu Apr 30, 2015 11:23 pm

Yes it was youtube,your amv looks so much cleaner and prettier in the dl version.Always leave a download link please.

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PostSubject: Re: [Koinu] Shattered (24/04/2015)   Sun May 03, 2015 3:14 pm

This was a decent video.
There were some rough camera movements and the orange color was a bit too much for my tastes(maybe tone it down a bit next time)
Other than that, it was an enjoyable romance video.
Keep it up!

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