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PostSubject: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:06 pm



Editor: Resma1
Anime: Tokyo Ghoul
Song: Starset - Carnivore

Description: Well, this is my first post in the forum, but I will write a presentation as soon as I finish this.
I believe you are all great editors and that's because I'm posting my newest amv, it would be great if some of you could give me advices on how to improve my editing...I'm not very experienced and I almost have no friends in the amv world! So yeah, as I said, it would be great ahaha

I hope you enjoy the video, byeee :)



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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Thu Sep 25, 2014 1:27 pm

Resma wrote:
I'm not very experienced and I almost have no friends in the amv world
Yup, we'll be your 1st friends then :3

Hi there! I quite enjoyed your video. It is true that it shows you are new to this hobby, but at the same time it shows you really have a lot of talent for this so I highly encourage you to keep going

The 1st point I like to point out is that you clearly thought well about what song to use with your anime. Carnivore certainly matches Tokyo Ghoul in one way or another which gets you an instant +1 from me. At the same time tho I thought the lyrics did not match at some stages like 0:17 to 0:23 << At this stage the lyrics talk about a man who the world keeps telling he will never achieve his goals/dreams, but the scenes you put are not as deep as the song. So focusing more on mood sync and lyric sync would be a good thing.

Although your beat sync was really good in this video. The intro music needed so much more. I mean 0:07 to 0:13 had so much going on with the music and drums, but you only put 2 clips there that are not dynamic enough (do not have enough movement) for the music. So be careful with music solos, doing them good will leave a positive impact on the whole video.

Aside from that I believe you are dong very great for a new editor. So much talent indeed, but I advise you to disable the resample. You can do that by right clicking your clip on your sony vegas timeline, and going to switches > Disable the resample. There will be no more duplicated frames.
So yea. Keep going dude! I'd love to see more videos from you!

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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Thu Sep 25, 2014 4:27 pm

Thank you man! You are right, I should have put some action in the intro part, also I will try to be more careful with the lyrics and choose the right/best scenes. I'm glad an advanced editor liked the video :)
Thank you for the resample tip too, never found that in any tutorial
I promise I will do my best with the next amvs

See you! :DD
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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Thu Sep 25, 2014 8:00 pm

not bad.

Check out some tutorials since you just started;



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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Thu Sep 25, 2014 9:13 pm

The funny thing is that I subbed to this guy's amv and tutorial channels just yesterday haha
Thank you, finally I found good rendering settings and the resample thing turned out veeery useful (masks were always a pain because of those duplicated frames)

Thank you guys :)
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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Thu Sep 25, 2014 9:50 pm

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The funny thing is that I subbed to this guy's amv and tutorial channels just yesterday

Yh, he's like a big deal in amv community. He doesn't always edit but when he does, he doesn't.

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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Fri Sep 26, 2014 4:27 pm

Nice and simple editing,only advice is;keep editing,its the fastest way for improving for starters.

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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:21 pm

Awesome!!!!  mean it is tokyo ghoul, of course it is awesome! and you did a good work too..... ;/
no sersious, I really enjoyed this amv, the song is really good too^^

and nope, I am pretty much representing the noobs in this forum xD
(Yeah its only me .-.)

hope to see more from you^^
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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Tue Sep 30, 2014 10:43 am

Thank you for your tips and encouragement guys! Helped a lot :))
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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Tue Sep 30, 2014 6:02 pm

does it show the comment I did for you? It is blank for me
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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Tue Sep 30, 2014 10:03 pm

You are right! i can't see it ://
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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Wed Oct 01, 2014 7:01 pm

I probably said something like this:

YAY tokyo ghoul <3

and then that you did an awesome work and that I like the song^^

and in the end I said:

and nope, I am pretty much representing the noobs here
(yeah its only me xD)
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PostSubject: Re: [Resma] Tokyo Ghoul - Carnivore (22/9/14)   Thu Oct 02, 2014 1:28 pm

Pieetrr wrote:
keep editing,its the fastest way for improving for starters.
Exactly this! +1

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