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PostSubject: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Sun Sep 21, 2014 9:05 pm



Editor: xDagoz
Anime Used: Bleach Jigoku-Hen
Song/Artist: Battle Cry - Imagine Dragons
Description: First AMV I complete in months! I've made this in 5 days or so. The last seconds are a bit rushed and the last two scenes seems too shiny (blame vegas). So, hope you enjoy it!
DDL: sendspace.com v3ukia

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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Sun Sep 21, 2014 11:49 pm

Oh wow, you actually made a full o:
Nicely done David!

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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Mon Sep 22, 2014 5:25 pm

potatotaco wrote:
Oh wow, you actually made a full o:
Nicely done David!
Thanks a lot Ivan \o and I'm surprised as well LOL

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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Thu Sep 25, 2014 1:11 pm

It certainly isn't bad at all, but not really great either.
While the editing of the video is splendid, and the output quality is quite decent. The connection between video and audio was weak.
The video started abruptly in a way that made almost no sense. To elaborate, the 1st minute moved from the 1st scene which could have been a good beginning, then moved to hollow Ichigo in flames, which didn't do much harm but didn't leave much room to have a decent beginning, which is why you moved to a different character's introduction, and then a battle that isn't related to him at all.
Not really nit picking here, I just hope you get my point. If the beginning doesn't make sense then it'll be hard for anything else to do that.

Afterwards the change of settings came totally out of the blue. While the direction of motion kind of matched, nothing else did. So the change was totally uncalled for, and contributed to the idea of not making much sense. But yes in all of these stages the editing was good and on spot so that's a +1.

After the 1st minute was over the video started to have a stronger connection with the audio. so this part was stronger than the previous, good job on that.

In general I thought it was too short to convey anything, but the editing of the video being the strong point. Focus more on the meaning of the video and keep going yo. Best of luck

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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Fri Sep 26, 2014 7:32 pm

995Gabber wrote:
It certainly isn't bad at all, but not really great either.
While the editing of the video is splendid, and the output quality is quite decent. The connection between video and audio was weak.
The video started abruptly in a way that made almost no sense. To elaborate, the 1st minute moved from the 1st scene which could have been a good beginning, then moved to hollow Ichigo in flames, which didn't do much harm but didn't leave much room to have a decent beginning, which is why you moved to a different character's introduction, and then a battle that isn't related to him at all.
Not really nit picking here, I just hope you get my point. If the beginning doesn't make sense then it'll be hard for anything else to do that.

Afterwards the change of settings came totally out of the blue. While the direction of motion kind of matched, nothing else did. So the change was totally uncalled for, and contributed to the idea of not making much sense. But yes in all of these stages the editing was good and on spot so that's a +1.

After the 1st minute was over the video started to have a stronger connection with the audio. so this part was stronger than the previous, good job on that.

In general I thought it was too short to convey anything, but the editing of the video being the strong point. Focus more on the meaning of the video and keep going yo. Best of luck
Thanks a lot Gabber, the criticism is appreciated a lot and I'll help me to improve, and I agree with all your points, this video was like a "comeback" kind of AMV, I was just trying this new style and wasn't paying too much attention to the story telling. Thanks a lot again.

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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Sat Sep 27, 2014 9:14 pm

video not avaible .-.
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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Sat Oct 04, 2014 3:45 am

Markus Meier wrote:
video not avaible .-.
It's blocked in Germany, you can download it and tell me your opinion.
> sendspace.com v3ukia

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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:59 am

jeeezz germany and its GEMA, thats reason enough to leave this country xD

whoa, I think you made an awesome one (except the end but you know that xD)
the beginning was a good introduction to the emotion that flows in this amv and then It got really intense :D

good job :D


feel like watching bleach now, but I dont have time for it xD
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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Sun Oct 05, 2014 1:46 pm

I really liked it, off course Gabber has some good points but other than that i think it is very pleasing to watch, keep it up ;)

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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Thu Oct 09, 2014 10:21 pm

danimetalxd wrote:
I really liked it, off course Gabber has some good points but other than that i think it is very pleasing to watch, keep it up ;)
Thanks you alot man, I really appreciate it \o/

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PostSubject: Re: [xDagoz] Battle Cry (21/09/2014)   Thu Oct 09, 2014 10:22 pm

Markus Meier wrote:
jeeezz germany and its GEMA, thats reason enough to leave this country xD

whoa, I think you made an awesome one (except the end but you know that xD)
the beginning was a good introduction to the emotion that flows in this amv and then It got really intense :D

good job :D


feel like watching bleach now, but I dont have time for it xD
Germany is different LOL, and thanks alot for the feedback ^^

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