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AzukaYuki

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PostSubject: AnimeFanGirl199 - I'm in hell (18/02/14)   Thu Apr 17, 2014 1:24 am

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Production: Seikatsu Team
Editor/s : Just me xD
*Anime Used: Naruto Shippuden
*Song/Artist: Shattered by Trading Yesterday
Contest Participating/ed: None
Description: Just an AMV about Kakashi, Obito and Rin ^^
Other Credits: Hum.. hello xD
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.
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PostSubject: Re: AnimeFanGirl199 - I'm in hell (18/02/14)   Sat Apr 19, 2014 4:05 pm

Liked the scene seletion until the part when the beats becomes faster, i think the mish mash of both high paced fightin scenes but then other low paced scenes interupted the flow. What i would also advise, is to look into using overlays and cc which would give a nicer look to the AMV but can also be used as cool transitions. Hope that helped :)

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PostSubject: Re: AnimeFanGirl199 - I'm in hell (18/02/14)   Sat Apr 19, 2014 7:45 pm

Oh Yo there nice to see you drop by again Anita :)

Sweet vid yo~ I liked the way you told the story, and the cute effects hehe, overall it was a beautiful video, but it had some irrelevant things like the title's relationship with the song and the vid, mainly because it wasn't that "dark" till the ending, and the other problem with the ending is that I felt like there was a big story "jump" because I didn't really understand what was going on, as in why he killed her and how the other guy came back to life (Sorreh lul I don't watch naruto)
But yesh, the story telling was nice till that stage.

Editing wise I believe it would have been prettier if you had tried to sync better with the music, because imo the sync was off here. The transitions and scen selection that I found weird might have been actually cool if sync-d better. I don't really know tho so I won't talk a lot about it Lol.

But yea nice vid! keep going!

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PostSubject: Re: AnimeFanGirl199 - I'm in hell (18/02/14)   Mon Apr 21, 2014 1:21 am

Thanks for your advices :3
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