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AzukaYuki

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PostSubject: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Sun Jan 12, 2014 11:15 pm

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Production: Seikatsu Team

Editor: AnimeFanGirl199

*Anime Used: Accel World

*Song/Artist: Unbreakable by Fireflight
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Description: Enjoy :3 It was for Dan's Saphyr Contest but I didn't have time to finish it earlier xD I am open to constructive criticism, after all I want progress more in my AMVs x)

Disclaimer: " This video is for entertainment purposes and is non profit" "Copyright Disclaimer Under Section 107 of the Copyright Act 1976, allowance is made for "fair use" for purposes such as criticism, comment, news reporting, teaching, scholarship, and research. Fair use is a use permitted by copyright statute that might otherwise be infringing. Non-profit, educational or personal use tips the balance in favor of fair use."
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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Sun Jan 12, 2014 11:29 pm

Nice one, i really liked it! The only thing is that u seemed to have forgotten to disable resample some parts :/. Good job and good luck in the contest!

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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Sun Jan 12, 2014 11:34 pm

Thanks! and yeah I'll do that in my future projects :)
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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Mon Jan 13, 2014 9:29 am

keep it up.


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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Mon Jan 13, 2014 4:55 pm

That was actually so powerful *^* well synced, simple and clear. well done Anita :) something inside tends to automatically like what seems to be somewhat naïve, it turns me on xD

Now I just have a few points that I thought will create a better result when taken care of. More like just 1 thing for now Lol, which is the sudden change in the environment / atmosphere. Examples: 0:59 & 1:15. In the 1st one I was still waiting to see what was going to happen in the fight, but you switched to the girl and then a car accident which got me a bit confused. Always better to have a good build up for your stages :) and the 2nd one had a build up but the fight started abruptly, I believe you could have made a better transition (since the colors and environment all changed).

Kudos for doing the switch good in the beginning like @ 0:27 and 0:37 :D Very happy with that *^*

In the end I see such cool potential :) Allow me to see you here next time xD
ohh and here is a vid that is somewhat similar to yours. Watch it and maybe you can learn a few things that you can take to make yours better :D

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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Mon Jan 13, 2014 8:16 pm

I liked it quite it a bit tbh.

Two things that annoyed was that if you added more transitions (i use mask as transitions quite a lot of the time) then the piece would have flown more rather than just a change of scene arbitrarily one after another. That leads on to the second thing that bugs me, i think that if you used pan and zooms and impact and all that shanaz (hopefully you still follow me) i personally think it would make a HUGE difference, especially because of the song choice. i.e lots of base and beats [impact point]

Might seem a bit negative but i liked it and wanna see that bit mowa improvement :D
(i sound so arrogant, sorry :/)
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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Mon Jan 13, 2014 9:24 pm

In my opinion this is a better amv than mine (actually i think it's BEAST, that lyric sync is amazing!), feelings were expressed in the rightest way possible and the atmosphere was so catchy!
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I will add my critique about your video later tonight.

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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Tue Jan 14, 2014 1:39 am

Okay x) and I already see the AMV of MrPampouks, actually it was his AMV that inspired me so much to do an AMV with that anime x')
and TheUzumakiAnimations, don't worry, it makes me more happy to know what I have to improve in my AMVs :)
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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Tue Jan 14, 2014 2:51 am

I seriously havent got that much time the last days to leave an opinion...sorry about that   
From what i saw i liked it but it could have been a bit better sync wise. I will leave a more detailed one in a couple of days(3 10 credit exams in a row so stronk   )

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PostSubject: Re: (AnimeFanGirl199) Unbreakable (09/10/13)   Tue Jan 14, 2014 5:00 pm

This looks pretty awesome, nice :D
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