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PostSubject: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 5:29 am

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DLL: mediafire.com watch/oyzyge4h2m3ict2/amv-crash.mp4
Editor: RealShinteki
Anime: Black Lagoon
Song: 12 Stones - Crash
Contest Participating/ed: Enigma's Time 2nd Edition IC
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It could've been a lot better, i half-assed the second action part of the amv because i ran out of scenes/time and got bored of the song so it's kinda shitty...
and yes i know the transitions are repetitive :/...
Other Credits: Beta testers! (dave,jas and ryan)

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PostSubject: Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 5:45 am

solid action video...only thing that im concerned about is the dynamics you used. When the song stepped up you should have done the same with the video in my opinion cause now there is not much difference between the slow and fast parts of the song. It flows well but i would have liked to see you pick up the pace when that guitar beat appeared. Also take into account the coloring between scenes next to each other(you cannot have a warm red scene followed by cold blueish scene...well you can but normally it would be better to adjust that xD )

Good job apart from that, masks were nice and flow was good so you get +1 from me. Thats all :)

also you get the seal of approval from me xD
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PostSubject: Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:55 am

Solid improvement man.
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PostSubject: Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 12:40 pm

I really liked it,some dynamic mishaps in a couple of places but other than that it was a really complete solid action amv.The thing that it had no colour correction is just preference  in my opinion but could have made it a little bit better but it was IC so i understand that part as well.

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PostSubject: Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 1:50 pm

+1 from me too! That was an enjoyable amv. Everything was said by the guy above...

   <--- that guy xD

As for me, i only think that it would be a lot better if the ending came a little later, it seemed too sudden

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PostSubject: Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 2:26 pm

solid vid man
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PostSubject: Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 2:27 pm

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PostSubject: Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 3:11 pm

TheInvisibleBlackxX wrote:
solid action video...only thing that im concerned about is the dynamics you used. When the song stepped up you should have done the same with the video in my opinion cause now there is not much difference between the slow and fast parts of the song. It flows well but i would have liked to see you pick up the pace when that guitar beat appeared. Also take into account the coloring between scenes next to each other(you cannot have a warm red scene followed by cold blueish scene...well you can but normally it would be better to adjust that xD )

Good job apart from that, masks were nice and flow was good so you get +1 from me. Thats all :)

also you get the seal of approval from me xD
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I agree man, will be sure to do it better next time xD thanks for the feedback i appreciate it!

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Solid improvement man.
Thanks gab!
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I really liked it,some dynamic mishaps in a couple of places but other than that it was a really complete solid action amv.The thing that it had no colour correction is just preference  in my opinion but could have made it a little bit better but it was IC so i understand that part as well.

Thanks dude and well it has cc but it's just curves, im not a fan of colors + i suck at making good cc with mbl xD
thanks for the feedback!

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As for me, i only think that it would be a lot better if the ending came a little later, it seemed too sudden

Well the ending came that fast and sudden because i was litterally on 0 scenes left xD so i had to wrap it up and end it somehow. Thanks for the feedback!

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solid vid man
Thanks!

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PostSubject: Re: [RealShinteki] Crash (31.12.2013)   Tue Dec 31, 2013 3:21 pm

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Animetube7 wrote:
slut.

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