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PostSubject: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Sun May 05, 2013 4:51 pm



Production: NSS, FFT, PDS
Editor/s : AnimeTube7
Anime Used: Mirai Nikki
Song/Artist: Without You - Ashes Remain
Contest Participating/ed: None
Description: 12 chosen ones are to fight for God's throne.
Other Credits: beta testers! :)
Disclaimer: 'Copyright Disclaimer Under Section 107 of the Copyright Act 1976, allowance is made for 'fair use' for purposes such as criticism, comment, news reporting, teaching, scholarship, and research. Fair use is a use permitted by copyright statute that might otherwise be infringing. Non-profit, educational or personal use tips the balance in favor of fair use'
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Sun May 05, 2013 5:08 pm

that was a nice video! Good job man, it was a lot better after 2:00, that probably is because i've linked this song to romance and i'd expect something more romantic but we can't have everything :) Some better lyric-syncing would make it even greater!
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Sun May 05, 2013 5:18 pm

thanks man! :)
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Sun May 05, 2013 5:34 pm

Alright. as I promised, here is your critique Lol.

You should watch out for your flow, it's kinda getting lost every now and then. Like at 0:25 with the mask that followed. not random, but it created a change in pace which has cost you points. you returned to your slow pace afterwards, so the sync and flow were restored.
0:41 it looks very nice I give you that. but are you sure it fits the mood the song has created? because I don't think so. the colours were really uncalled for, and kinda stopped the bit for serving the purpose of being as emotional as it had to be.
0:49 - 1:00 I don't know about you but dude am I "not liking" your fades. could be just my tendency to dislike fades, but I doubt that since it had masks as well. anyway this is worst part in the Amv for me.
1:00 - 1:25 I quite liked this bit. Transitions were good, and the concept was nice as well. loved your idea.
1:25 - 1:42 These fades. I don't like them. + your clips were going at a faster pace than they had to. if you can find a way to sync with the music other than changing the clip i'd appreciate that.
1:42 - 2:13 This part is good. nothing to be pointed out besides the clip with the phone breaking. the quick motion wasn't really fitting with the music pace. other than that it was a clean part.
2:13 - 2:27 Dude I usually hate repetitive Fx, but this case is another story. you're doing it good that's for sure.
2:27 - 3:12 Nice impact. and you were saying you're not good at action? well I need to re-think about that. anyway so you kind of missed a few beats. got the rest right tho. but the flow was lost when you were a skipping a beat.
3:12 - 3:32 Ohh man, this part is clearly rushed. the action part started out so good, but ended rather bad. only thing to say is that one shouldn't rush any part. take your time, this is not an IC.
3:32 - End. Good... what? just 1 word. that's about it.



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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Sun May 05, 2013 5:48 pm

thanks lacky. I appreciate the critique man. I'll try to improve my works!
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Mon May 06, 2013 8:30 pm

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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Mon May 06, 2013 8:59 pm

:shock: da fuc is that LOL
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Mon May 06, 2013 9:27 pm

LOL! not with the guests Letha xD not with the guests
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Mon May 06, 2013 10:56 pm

>implying im not serious and immature?
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Mon May 06, 2013 11:39 pm

Lethasson wrote:
>implying im not serious and immature?
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Tue May 07, 2013 2:10 pm

implying that spamming a rape face is not really the most mature act to do
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Tue May 07, 2013 2:22 pm

I liked it. not a fan of the sliding trans, think they got a bit repetitive. but the masking and impact at the end was nice.
good job.
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Tue May 07, 2013 2:30 pm

Ok lets see...I've never watched mirrai nikki so i will just focus on the editing side.
I liked the flow you put up until you used that roll up(dont know how it is called but i mean the one at 0:43-0:49)...If you just stopped at the text on 0:43 it would have been perfect. And maybe be careful on how much you use the fades because around 2:00 it seemed like a bit excessive.

Your masks are really clear and well placed i'll give you that.And last around 2:30 your pacing changes a lot, so i think a smoother transition could have been made between these 2 parts.

Generally a really enjoyable vid, really solid work, although as i haven't watched mirrai nikki i couldn't understand the vid pretty well :)

See ya around ;)
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Tue May 07, 2013 2:50 pm

thank you guys. I seriously appreciate the comments and critiques/advice. :)
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Tue May 07, 2013 2:55 pm

Congratulations for making it to Nero Team btw :) it's always been your dream and now look at yourself man
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Tue May 07, 2013 5:08 pm

Really enjoyable video , i really liked it, just 2 things, i didn't really feel like the song was fitting when you where showing somebody else other than yuno and yuki and after 2:36 i would prefer more drama....and i really liked the ending
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Tue May 07, 2013 5:38 pm

nikos150 wrote:
Really enjoyable video , i really liked it, just 2 things, i didn't really feel like the song was fitting when you where showing somebody else other than yuno and yuki and after 2:36 i would prefer more drama....and i really liked the ending

really? oh really? :afro:
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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Tue May 07, 2013 5:40 pm

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PostSubject: Re: [AMV-Full] The Fight For God's Throne   Sun May 12, 2013 5:04 pm

very clean editing, transitions not bad but there are parts that were forced but very good story well told :)
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